Thank you! Glad you liked them :)
i love these -- your writing is amazing.
Many thanks! And welcome: you're a new reader here, relatively speaking, are you not? Your username isn't familiar to me.
Beautiful. So evocative and melancholy. I could definitely see shades of Arkham Asylum here, but hardly a legion of faults. :)
(Would you mind terribly if I friended you? I've been a huge fan of your GO stuff for a while and now I have glorious TDK updates to look forward to!)
Thank you so much! Evocative and melancholy is what I'm after, so I'm glad it worked for you.
The paragraph on Crane gave me chills, quite literally. That last line there is so fantastic. As is the part with Doctor Destiny.
Thanks! I was far more pleased with the Crane bit than I thought I would be :)
It did feel pretty serious at the time.
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ok. I'm done and just wanting more now.
LOVE IT!
Well, I have no idea what's up next - but I'm sure I'll figure that out soon ;)
Thanks!
Alfred's was great.
The hours are miserable and the bloody electronics are infuriating, but at least the pay is good and the company is tolerable. Bruce's smile is only an indulgent wink of his eye away.
And the thought that Bruce actually asked? Is great too.
I love all of these to death, but that may just be my favorite.
--Except then there's this:
You spend the rest of your time not giving a shit about what time it is, because what use is a clock unless something's set to explode by it?
which just makes me go ahahahahahhaahah for an extended amount of time and is also great. : D
I'm glad somebody liked Alfred's, because in comparison to the others, I was really afraid his and Lucius's would pale!
Thank you very much.
Holy hell. Wow. So these are all terrible and beautiful, but Harvey's just about broke me.
Until Kingdom Come: the coin will spin, and he will serve two masters.
That's...let's see...thirteen words. And you put all of Harvey Dent and Two-Face, all his grief and joy and past and future, in there and then hit me in the heart with it. Oh. Oh, man.
I may well be proudest of his, and I'm especially tickled that it seems to be one of the most popular! Thanks so much :)
Oh, lovely. I'm getting the same kind of deliriously dreamy feel as from Arkham Asylum.
His shadow's grown long and narrow, warped with the weight of another man's doubt. Beautiful.
unfailing flip of his father's silver I really dig the alliteration in this!
Alfred is such a gem. ♥
what use is a clock unless something's set to explode by it? A very Joker thought.
Once again: absolutely beautiful work.
I would love nothing so much as to be working with an awesome artist on a graphic novel *sigh*
Thank you!
Oh my God. I was just bopping along, reading reading reading, I am such a sucker for Arkhamfic HI CRANE, and then I run into DOCTOR DESTINY AND OH MY GOD THE SCARY.
*breathes*
Basically, I am a sucker for Arkhamfic. But I loved Alfred and Lucius and Gordon too, and of course Bruce! This makes me so happy.
I agree: Doctor Destiny is utterly terrifying.
I hope I can find more to do with Arkham. I fear I'm enamored of the place ;)
I'm running out of compliments. Please don't stop writing for the Bat-fandom anything soon.
Not stopping any time soon, anyway ;) When I'm on a creative high with something, it can take a good while to burn itself out.
Still, thank you!
Gorgeous. To be quite honest, I feel like you created these characters, darling, because you're so frighteningly in their heads. I especially loved Poison Ivy's, Gordon's, and Bruce's passages.
Your writing is true insight into the twisted mechanisms of their minds. I absolutely adore it. <3<3<3
Characters that seem too frighteningly mundane are the ones that fail to interest me ;)
Thanks so much, dear.
Agh, fantastic, once again!
As someone in one of the comments above mentioned, I love the line: Until Kingdom Come: the coin will spin, and he will serve two masters.- love it.
And I just love the way this line is worded: They screech and flail at the daylight, toss silver dollars into fountains, wail the names of lost loved-ones and each other in the night. Gives me shivers.
And, and, well, I love every part of this *hehe*. It definitly sucks me into that "world" and creates such an atmosphere.
It's a world I'd gladly create graphic novels for, I swear to God. It's one of my many dream careers.
Glad you liked this so much; thanks!
*gahhh* Such beautiful awesomeness overwhelms me X.X
*offers some tea to calm you down*
Thank you :)
Wow. A lovely series of vignettes. They're almost poetic. Wonderful!
Thank you very much! Glad you enjoyed them so much :)
Beautifully, fantastically done. An excellent look at Gotham and its main players. I can certainly see some resemblance to Arkham Asylum but I can easily say that I absolutely love it. The voice is sharp, biting but beautifully clear and poetic and every single character seems to be right on the money.
I could probably rant for a while, but everyone's said about the same thing as me. This is awesome.
Buddy Christ approves.
Buddy Christ! Hiiii! Can I have a new iPod for your birthday? Mine is busted.
I hope I can find something else to do in this vein. Thank you!
My, this blew me away as ever. You're just as massively talented at these poignant one-shot short things as you are with the multichapter lovelies. It's always so poetic in a way which isn't even usually my thing, but it so appeals to some part of me that I can't quite put to words. Just agh, a very flowing and satisfying read always.
In such short paragraphs there's so much detail and analysis on these characters which are all so apt, in their voices, and some of them even bring up new ideas I wouldn't have really thought about before. I think that's a part of this being on some of the characters I don't read a lot of/focus on much, but it's all still so interesting!
I love them all really but Poison Ivy's was a really cool interpretation, and I like the tie in to the fic, and naturally the Joker pushing people to drastic measures more. Two-Face's was intensely accurate and -him- in every word, the 'other life' and the change in the way he sees chance. Alfred's was lovely and so true. Batman's bit was enjoyable for me as I always find his flaws of interest. And the Joker one was very him also, and of course time has no real meaning to him.
It does have a bit of an 'Arkham Asylum' feel to it too yes~. ::considers reread of 'Serious House-' despite being kind of a wuss to the creepiness::.
At the moment, I'm truly at a loss for anything else I could turn into another multi-chapter epic. I think I'm just having fun seeing how I can take bits and pieces of the graphic novels and work them in!
Thank you so, so much <3
these are capsules of awesome. i'm in love with your take on Bruce, it feels true. it's deeply satisfying.
you get my Arkham icon.
Bruce is really growing on me. I'm rather astonished!
Thank you.
Everytime I go to read one of your stories I think "she can't have done better than last time, there's no way it can get better." But it always does.
His shadow's grown long and narrow, warped with the weight of another man's doubt
That literally made me shiver. I just...I can't get past that sentence. It carried so much weight and value in just a few perfectly structured words. That's something about Jim Gordon that he wouldnt even be able to tell you himself. Wonderful wonderful.
(Frankly, I don't think this one was better than Arkham Sessions. But then, I think I've shot myself in the foot on that venture; it was a freak flight of inspiration, and I'm desperately hoping I'll live to match it!)
Thank you so very much. I know this one hasn't lured quite the same crowd of readers in as before, seeing as the rating's not particularly...juicy...and it's not exactly full of pr0n, but I'm truly pleased that people read it, period.
Lovely! I could actually imagine photographs or comic panels to accompany each movement. :)
I'd love it if somebody came along and wanted to illustrate this. So I'll say it in a public comment and hope maybe somebody stumbles across it *wry grin*
Thanks so much!
:D Seriously, this just made my week a thousand times better. Love your Joker voice, the Batsy mention made me smile. *waits patiently for more*
My next piece is going to be...similar to this one in that it'll be drawing heavy inspiration from some graphic novels in spite of being TDK-based, but different in that I'm looking a bit farther afield than just the Batman comics.
Thank you very much!
Wow, that was amazing! I love to see the characters that don't get written about much expanded upon. I was especially glad for the Dr. D piece, you don't see him much in the comics and Arkham Asylum made me curious about him.
In dreams I walk with you.
And I admit a long (creeped-out) fondness for Dr. D if only because he's appeared in my favorite graphic-novel series ever (Sandman). Somehow, the invasion of one's sleeping mind really does seem the ultimate threat.
Thank you very much!
Oh I'm adoring your interpretation of Poison Ivy... and she and the Joker teaming up. (I'm not even keen on slashing them - I just find myself really liking the idea of them working together.)
Bravo. These are all very engaging lil' entries into these characters' heads. I also really love how you write Alfred... I've had a crush on the old guy since the Burton films. And Michael Caine just brings him up to a whole 'nother level of appreciation for me. :)
For some reason, the two of them working together intrigues me. I have no plans to pair them, no - but I may yet see what else I can get out of the odd symbiosis that I had to create in order for Next Time to work out the way it did.
I never much liked the "old" Alfred, but from the first moment I saw Michael Caine in the role, gosh, I was in love.
Thank you so much!
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This is the rare, wonderful fic that one must digest and come back to later to make anything like a coherent comment. Thanks for it!
Thank you very much! I'm really pleased that you enjoyed it <3 |