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Hot Fuzz fic: "When to Stop" - Nick/Danny - R/NC17 [Sep. 9th, 2008|03:38 am]
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Title: When to Stop
Fandom: Hot Fuzz
Pairing: Nicholas/Danny
Rating: R/NC-17
Notes: At this point, I can't keep track of what-all is going on in my head. I really can't. Saw the film for the first time earlier this evening - or, no, at this point, it's yesterday evening. Might as well get this out of my system. In my mind, this is set more or less immediately post-film, but you can place it post-canon wherever you will.
Summary: Discovering the extent of one's limits is never an easy process.


Awkward doesn't even begin to cover it.

If there's anything that fails to surprise Nicholas, it's that they're on pretty even footing. If he's honest with himself, he's only ever done this a handful of times - meaning once with that shy, smart girl who'd been in his graduating class at Canterbury and then the disaster that had been Janine, period, most of which he'd blocked out.

Danny, on the other hand, hasn't done this at all; he doesn't reckon that abortive attempts at sixth-form snogging count. The only difference being that he doesn't seem terribly fussed about that. Nicholas is, on the other hand, very fussed, relatively even scores aside. Danny doesn't reckon there's any point in that, either. He's perfectly happy to kiss Nicholas again and linger over it this time, one hand cupped to Nicholas's cheek with his usual, effortless tenderness. Nicholas shivers in spite of himself.

"Are you afraid of what the neighbors'll say?" Danny asks, his tone soft and understanding. "I hate to break it to you, but mine say plenty. They wouldn't recognize a movie-night if it hit 'em upside the head. Half the town already knows."

"If there were anything to know," laughs Nicholas, nervously. Danny's cheek is smooth with the faintest trace of stubble. He leans forward and rests his forehead against Danny's, sighing. "Although I suppose that, considering this, there is."

Danny's laughing with him now, and somehow it's no longer awkward at all.


*



On the flip-side, it's something of a different story.

In spite of his initial confidence, Danny proves a bit shy. Nicholas supposes he can understand that: he'd been taunted for his roundness as a child, but he'd always felt fortunate to have grown out of it by his early teens. For Danny, having never outgrown it, the matter must still rankle. Nicholas slides his sweating palms from Danny's exposed collarbone down to his stomach and murmurs, haltingly, that he wants this.

And just like that, Danny's trousers loosen and fall. Funny, but it doesn't take much, and Nicholas isn't sure which of them got to his fly first. Doesn't matter. Danny's kissing Nicholas again - slowly, worshipfully - and it's all Nicholas can do to keep his hands steady at Danny's waist. Careful, now. No need to rush, after all.

When Danny touches him, down they go. In a tangle of limbs and mumbled apologies, the only thing standing between bliss and hilarity is that the bed's still pristine, not even unmade. Nicholas's newly prepared cottage has become their honeymoon suite.

"What's so funny?" asks Danny. His cock's pressed against Nicholas's belly, and coherent thought has grown difficult. And then, even more softly still: "Nicholas?"

"I've switched off," Nicholas whispers in near-amazement. His mind's gone blank.

The only fitting answer is a kiss, then a tug at Danny's pants to let him know he means business. Danny's groan seizes them both, urgent and welcome. Nicholas's fingertips graze over Danny's scars and settle at the small of his back. Shedding their shorts is curt, desperate work. By now, Nicholas's fairly aching.

"So you have," Danny sighs, and bliss folds them close, holds them under.


*



What does take Nicholas by surprise is that Danny is quiet when he comes.

Groans fade to moans fade to whimpers, followed by the brief sting of Danny's teeth at Nicholas's shoulder, and then, breathless, he clings and shudders in silence. All the while, Nicholas cradles him with both eyes closed, his mouth half open against Danny's forehead and his breath coming in short, sharp gasps. He's not far behind, and he's not likely to hold himself back. The thought floods Nicholas with momentary dread.

Danny's holding him now, saying, "S'all right, then. Really it is."

Danny's hand on him is all at once coaxing, reverent, and sure. And so, propriety be damned, he shouts with the sheer relief of it, of knowing he hasn't lost Danny or even himself in simply learning to just let go for once in his sorry life. Nicholas's release rolls off him in waves, and Danny seems to take more pleasure in this than he'd taken on his own account. Nicholas slumps, finally, shaken; he seeks Danny's mouth only to find it waiting. In stark contrast to Danny's warmth, the room's grown unbearably cold.

"Let's get you covered," Danny murmurs against Nicholas's cheek. "You've caught a chill."

No, thinks Nicholas, once they're cleaned up and settled in. Not in the least.
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[User Picture]From: [info]salmon_pink
2008-09-09 03:10 am (UTC)

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....I haven't seen Hot Fuzz in donkeys, and I've never read any slash fic, despite the lovely slashiness of it, but this just fit and took me right back to the movie. I could hear them, hear Nick trying to shed all of his issues and actually relax into it, hear Danny's mix of bravado and naive. This was, in a word, awesome. ♥
[User Picture]From: [info]irisbleufic
2008-09-09 03:56 pm (UTC)

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...and I hadn't seen it, period, until yesterday. Which I only now realize was an absolute crime.

Thank you so much ♥
[User Picture]From: [info]gblvr
2008-09-09 03:42 am (UTC)

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Eeeeeeeee! This is so sweet!
[User Picture]From: [info]irisbleufic
2008-09-09 03:55 pm (UTC)

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Thank you, dear <3
[User Picture]From: [info]wizzard890
2008-09-09 03:47 am (UTC)

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*flail*

*flailflailflail*

I...just...guh...This was awesome. So sweet and tender, everything that's so evident in their friendship taken to a whole new level.

Loved it.
[User Picture]From: [info]irisbleufic
2008-09-09 03:55 pm (UTC)

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I can't wait to watch the outtakes this evening. I'm going to get all I can out of this DVD before I have to take it back to the rental place on Thursday...
[User Picture]From: [info]fiareynne
2008-09-09 04:10 am (UTC)

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I cannot help feeling slightly responsible for this, and wickedly proud of myself with very little justification. \o/

That is to say, I loved it.
[User Picture]From: [info]irisbleufic
2008-09-09 03:45 pm (UTC)

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You were about, oh, the tenth person in a long line of insistent HF recommenders. And I don't regret finally giving in. Not in the least ;)
[User Picture]From: [info]flwrpwr_vampyre
2008-09-09 04:10 am (UTC)

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You know, I can't believe I didn't slash them. They're everything I normally look for in a slash couple.

I keep feeling like I'm saying the same things over and over to you but you really wrote them so fantastically and in character.

I absolutely love seeing when you've written a new story for a fandom I know because it means that I'm about to be enthralled by it.
[User Picture]From: [info]irisbleufic
2008-09-09 03:36 pm (UTC)

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I think they were purpose-built for it, to be honest *g* And gosh, I fell quick and hard this time, no doubt about it. I finished watching the film somewhere around 10 PM and this was done by 3:00 AM. I really fussed at it, though - more than I've fussed at any of the batfic so far. It's kind of peculiar. Writing this felt like the fast-and-hard slip into GO fandom several years ago...

Thank you!
[User Picture]From: [info]teacrumb
2008-09-09 06:03 am (UTC)

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HOT FUZZ. I never even considered this as a fandom!!! Gloriously sweet and the voices were so in character. Okay, between this and alfred/lucius I think you might be my new hero of the obscure. No seriously.
[User Picture]From: [info]irisbleufic
2008-09-09 03:31 pm (UTC)

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There's not a huge amount of fic out there, it would seem, but I'm discovering that there's enough. [info]sandfordpolice is a good place to start!
[User Picture]From: [info]tabooism
2008-09-09 07:04 am (UTC)

Yarp!

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You just killed me. :)

[User Picture]From: [info]irisbleufic
2008-09-09 03:30 pm (UTC)

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Goddamn it, woman, what life of yours are we on by now?

;)
[User Picture]From: [info]aqua_eyes
2008-09-09 09:34 am (UTC)

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<3<3<3 I think I love you. In fact, I am sure I do!

Nick and Danny are so cute together. <3
[User Picture]From: [info]irisbleufic
2008-09-09 03:29 pm (UTC)

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I THINK I LOVE YOUR ICON. HELL, I THINK I LOVE ALL YOU PEOPLE'S ICONS.

They are, at that <3 Thank you very much!
[User Picture]From: [info]spam_ff
2008-09-09 11:02 am (UTC)

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Hello, I know I haven't commented anything here in ages, but you wrote a Hot Fuzz fic.. wow!!!(!!)
I'm writing only this because I think I'll keep this one for a raining day- or something- and, knowing myself probably I will not comment it properly the day I'll read it, so, thank you now (How I know it's beautiful before reading it? Simple faith in your skill XD)
[User Picture]From: [info]irisbleufic
2008-09-09 03:28 pm (UTC)

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I only just saw it for the first time last night. And the tumble-down on this one was faster than usual, as far as film-end-time-to-first-fic-completion-time goes ;)

Thank you!
[User Picture]From: [info]jennaria
2008-09-09 11:28 am (UTC)

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Aww. They're so sweet.
[User Picture]From: [info]irisbleufic
2008-09-09 03:28 pm (UTC)

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Oh, they are. I'm afraid I couldn't resist.
[User Picture]From: [info]goddessdster
2008-09-09 11:31 am (UTC)

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Very nicely done. I enjoyed this a lot!
[User Picture]From: [info]irisbleufic
2008-09-09 03:27 pm (UTC)

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Thank you! Your icon = FTW. Kissing cops and a notorious graffiti artist make for twice the awesome.
[User Picture]From: [info]decor_noctis
2008-09-09 11:53 am (UTC)

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I am so delighted right now, even capslock couldn't properly express it ♥____♥
[User Picture]From: [info]irisbleufic
2008-09-09 03:26 pm (UTC)

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Thank you. And OMFG, your icon is adorable. It figures that HF fandom would have cute icons.
[User Picture]From: [info]tootsiemuppet
2008-09-09 12:16 pm (UTC)

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Hot and sweet. I love it. :D
[User Picture]From: [info]irisbleufic
2008-09-09 03:25 pm (UTC)

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Thank you! Nice icon. I'm trying to recall what shot that is...
[User Picture]From: [info]semielliptical
2008-09-09 12:49 pm (UTC)

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Lovely! Danny's matter-of-fact approach is just right, as is Nick's initial awkwardness.
[User Picture]From: [info]irisbleufic
2008-09-09 03:25 pm (UTC)

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Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it :)
[User Picture]From: [info]annlarimer
2008-09-09 02:06 pm (UTC)

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That's pretty awesome there. Yup. Yup.
[User Picture]From: [info]irisbleufic
2008-09-09 02:58 pm (UTC)

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...and your icon is so freaking adorable I can't see straight right now.

Thank you very much!
[User Picture]From: [info]obsessical
2008-09-09 03:13 pm (UTC)

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Wow, that was absolutely sweet and awesome and everything a good fuzz slashfic should be and more.

*claps heartily*
[User Picture]From: [info]irisbleufic
2008-09-09 03:23 pm (UTC)

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Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed this. Setting loose one's first fic in a new fandom is never easy, but I do think I could get the hang of this one ;)
[User Picture]From: [info]popcorn_oracle
2008-09-09 09:03 pm (UTC)

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(Okay, so this fic finally made me give in/reminded me and finally watch Hot Fuzz after hearing about it for ages and being lazy. Very glad I did though, so much cute.)

Such a perfect post-movie piece! This is exactly how they seemed like they would be to me. You've got all the reasons why they're so good for each other here and of course Nick's issues with being in control, and Danny's insecurity. Lovely, and suitably gentle mini fic <3.
[User Picture]From: [info]irisbleufic
2008-09-09 09:55 pm (UTC)

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Frankly, I couldn't believe that the level of cute actually lived up to its hype! I always love it when the subtext is so blatant that nobody can blame you for going off the rails with it.

Thank you so much!
[User Picture]From: [info]briebribeez
2008-09-09 10:03 pm (UTC)

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Very sweet - I'd have to rewatch the film again, I think, to get my head more into it, but I did very much enjoy it.
[User Picture]From: [info]irisbleufic
2008-09-09 10:13 pm (UTC)

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I can't believe I didn't watch the film earlier. So cute.
[User Picture]From: [info]twilightgardens
2008-09-09 11:32 pm (UTC)

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Wow, that's the quickest I've ever had a request filled!

(Fantastic. They are adorable, aren't they?)

[User Picture]From: [info]irisbleufic
2008-09-09 11:34 pm (UTC)

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The freaky part is that just as your comment came through saying you wanted to see me take these guys on, I was writing the last sentence of this piece. And I thought...right. The telepathy's on double-frequency tonight.

I'm so pleased that you like it *hugs*
[User Picture]From: [info]squeeful
2008-09-10 01:19 am (UTC)

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*FLAIL!*

You're upping the capslock ante for today, ya'know. Along with the squeaking and squeeing and jumping up and down.

I've the insane 3 disc collectors edition. I'd be happy to rip you some more extra features if you wish. The second disc is worth it alone.
[User Picture]From: [info]irisbleufic
2008-09-10 09:43 am (UTC)

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I think I'm going to re-watch it one more time today, just to get my money's worth before I have to take it back to the rental place.

And OMG YES. This rental is only a single-disc version with the standard outtakes, so...
[User Picture]From: [info]thimpressionist
2008-09-10 01:28 am (UTC)

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Guh. I fried my brain in the loveliest of ways.
[User Picture]From: [info]irisbleufic
2008-09-10 09:44 am (UTC)

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Wishes for a speedy un-frying, then *wry grin* Thank you so much!
[User Picture]From: [info]big_twinkie
2008-09-10 06:26 pm (UTC)

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mmm. verra nice.
[User Picture]From: [info]irisbleufic
2008-09-10 06:37 pm (UTC)

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Thank you!
[User Picture]From: [info]cracked_shield
2008-09-10 10:44 pm (UTC)

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Well if that didn't just put a smile on my face! x3 Very nice work. As usual.

What kills me though is that you only just saw Hot Fuzz!! Have you seen "Shawn of the Dead" yet? These two really need to make another movie. Now.
[User Picture]From: [info]irisbleufic
2008-09-10 10:49 pm (UTC)

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...what kills me is that I just posted a new piece of HF fic. Um. By which I mean this one is now the old one. And dude, I haven't seen SotD, but that's getting remedied THIS WEEKEND. Stat.

Thank you, dear <3
[User Picture]From: [info]prairiestar
2008-09-11 12:29 am (UTC)

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MORE CAPSLOCK EXCITEMENT FOR YOU!

I love it, you write all graceful and honest-like and you're doing it in one of my favorite and most neglected fandoms! I'm off to read your other piece now. This one was just lovely.
[User Picture]From: [info]irisbleufic
2008-09-11 12:32 am (UTC)

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*blush*

Thank you very much! The welcome in this little fandom has been very warm indeed. If you're any standard by which to judge folks, I'd say I've stumbled into a place where I'll feel very much at home.
[User Picture]From: [info]seraficradiance
2008-09-11 04:44 pm (UTC)

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hahaa, that was great!
[User Picture]From: [info]irisbleufic
2008-09-11 04:46 pm (UTC)

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Thank you! I'm very glad you enjoyed it :)
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